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01/25/06, 01:34 AM
Sitting all alone
talking on the phone.
Wishing this would end
on a better note.
Knowing that it won't.
She's fallen for another
and knocked the wind
out of me. And with my own "brother".
I try to act strong.
I can only wonder how long
she will allow my pain to last.
and finally put me in the past.
We've gone through too much
for it all to end with a single touch
of a button she lets the call and our love end.

Some other people liked this from another Emma Forum so I thought I would put it here. Keep in mind I wrote this in like 5 min.

Sweetened Angel
01/25/06, 04:47 PM
it pretty cool. i love it.

Razi
01/25/06, 10:13 PM
For a 5 min poem, it sure is awesome!

-Razi

01/26/06, 12:11 AM
Thanks guys I am glad that you like it. I am still going to try to write more poems at some point. But now I am trying to get somewhere with my Fan Fic.

Kari
01/26/06, 10:42 AM
Hey yeah that's great for five minutes! Nice rhyming too :D

03/19/06, 05:35 AM
I ran into my ex again the one this is about and I think writing this helped me get over it a lil more cause I didn't even have any ill feelings towards her this time.