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Esther
06/13/06, 07:49 PM
as it's said in the title i do have a 12th song...i kinda felt bored ending the songs on an odd note..so now im making it even...i'll type it up tomorrow..have a good summer everyone!

Esther
06/14/06, 10:30 AM
well i only have one verse to this thing.a little feed back is probably neccessary for this ....when i have two words in a parethesie with a slash between them it means that i'm not sure which word to use


take the chorus for example

Breathe (into/through) me

C'mon, in & out slowly

see?..i don't know which one to use..
anyways... here it goes...

Chorus

Breathe (into/through) me

C'mon, in & out slowly

Verse 1

Please tell my why i can't breathe

Maybe it's the night

It doesn't make me feel right

Tell me why i can't cry but

i can weep ...

Please tell me

So i can see

What you belive in me

Can you just

Breathe (into/through) me

C'mon, In & out slowly

Please tell me why i can't breathe