Israel trip song titled 12 day journey...need help w/it
 

my Principal gave me a challange to write up a ong for before i leave....here'swhat i got so far

This is my 12 day Journey
So come with me
We were separated from our families
to live as a community

I was scared and nervous before i even went on the plane
b/c my mom went insane
packing our luggage
giving us kisses
saying goodbye
my mom didn't want to let me go
then we all cried

While we were on the plane
My sister held my hand trying to cut off my circulation to my arms
And boy!..i thought i would be like her ..but no, i was calm
she was a nervous wreck

i'm planning to add something about the days...like for example

on the 5th day
We climbed the top of the Wall/ the Kotel - that's the wailing wall if you guys didn't realise that-

I was afraid i might fall
cause i'm nervouse about things like that

Then we climbed a cliff and
took a dip in an oasis
i watched some boys and girls actually wrestle each other
i said "Oh, brother!"
trying not to get wet..

oops!
 

i just realized that..oops!

that ok i just deleted one topic.

i like your story.

thanks....if anyone wants to help me with it they can..i kinda have Jet lag right now...and writer's block.. much help appreciated..