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Old 01/07/18, 10:57 AM   #10
Silvy In Space
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Default Re: How Ninia Storm should have been done?

Just shore up the adr and fix some of the diolouge. Also shore up some of the plot Give more background on the Ninja Acadamies and why theh exist. Come up woth a real reason why they don't try and rescue them right awaY. Give the Thunders a better reason to trust Lothor. Don't have the Thunders totally switch sides right away. This avoids the unneeded arch where an evil spell make them turn against the Winds again after just switchint sides the first time.
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