i got it!
well i only have one verse to this thing.a little feed back is probably neccessary for this ....when i have two words in a parethesie with a slash between them it means that i'm not sure which word to use
take the chorus for example
Breathe (into/through) me
C'mon, in & out slowly
see?..i don't know which one to use..
anyways... here it goes...
Chorus
Breathe (into/through) me
C'mon, in & out slowly
Verse 1
Please tell my why i can't breathe
Maybe it's the night
It doesn't make me feel right
Tell me why i can't cry but
i can weep ...
Please tell me
So i can see
What you belive in me
Can you just
Breathe (into/through) me
C'mon, In & out slowly
Please tell me why i can't breathe
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