06/13/06, 08:49 PM | #1 |
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12th song..i'll type it up tomorrow
as it's said in the title i do have a 12th song...i kinda felt bored ending the songs on an odd note..so now im making it even...i'll type it up tomorrow..have a good summer everyone!
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06/14/06, 11:30 AM | #2 |
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i got it!
well i only have one verse to this thing.a little feed back is probably neccessary for this ....when i have two words in a parethesie with a slash between them it means that i'm not sure which word to use
take the chorus for example Breathe (into/through) me C'mon, in & out slowly see?..i don't know which one to use.. anyways... here it goes... Chorus Breathe (into/through) me C'mon, in & out slowly Verse 1 Please tell my why i can't breathe Maybe it's the night It doesn't make me feel right Tell me why i can't cry but i can weep ... Please tell me So i can see What you belive in me Can you just Breathe (into/through) me C'mon, In & out slowly Please tell me why i can't breathe
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